In High School, our academic counselors would tell us that our
college admission essays were a very vital aspect of getting accepted in
college. They would inform us that it didn’t matter the excellent grades we got
.If our campus admission essay was written in a poor manner it would mess up
our chances of getting into campus. They told us to write it in a way which
brought out our personalities. They informed us that colleges wanted to read
admission essays that told a story about ourselves, our ambitions and dreams.
They also wanted to get a glimpse of our personality in a thoughtful and mature
manner. We were warned though about going too deep into personal matters that
was irrelevant to the application. This usually put off the admission board.
What they desired to see were
issues and matters that had a large impact on our lives, which led us to reach
the stage that we were currently at. This included the life struggles that you
had to undergo to achieve academically and personally. It also meant the
obstacles that you had to overcome in life. The tone of the essay also mattered
because nobody would want to read an essay that was written in a rude and
arrogant manner. It was vital that we wrote out our achievements in a way that
didn’t sound as if we were bragging. We were also informed that we should try
our best to sound like we weren’t whining or complaining about our problems. At
the end of the day, all the colleges expected, was to get students in its
campus grounds that not only had excellent grades, but also students who would
be good citizens of the campus. After receiving this information, I had to
ensure that my college admission essay stood out so that I could be placed in
the acceptance pile.